[master] 08f2bc5 Minor fixes

Poul-Henning Kamp phk at FreeBSD.org
Thu Sep 15 07:21:08 CEST 2016


commit 08f2bc560761d1d214a48deab93d9e3c38639fdc
Author: Poul-Henning Kamp <phk at FreeBSD.org>
Date:   Thu Sep 15 05:20:33 2016 +0000

    Minor fixes

diff --git a/doc/sphinx/whats-new/relnote-5.0.rst b/doc/sphinx/whats-new/relnote-5.0.rst
index 0c979f8..992e7ac 100644
--- a/doc/sphinx/whats-new/relnote-5.0.rst
+++ b/doc/sphinx/whats-new/relnote-5.0.rst
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ without any bad security holes.
 So yeah… 5.0 is not entirely what we had hoped it would be, but we
 are as proud as one can possibly be anyway.
 
-To keep this release not short(er), we have put the purely technical
+To keep this release note short(er), we have put the purely technical
 stuff in two separate documents:
 
 * :ref:`whatsnew_changes_5.0`
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ How to get Varnish 5.0
 
 `Source download <https://repo.varnish-cache.org/source/varnish-5.0.0.tar.gz>`_
 
-Packages for most mainstream operating systems should appear in as
+Packages for mainstream operating systems should appear in as
 soon as they trickle through the machinery.
 
 
@@ -48,8 +48,7 @@ hours out of tree.  Upgrading from 4.1 to 5.0 to get that should
 also be a no-brainer.
 
 We have also fixed at lot of minor bugs, and improved many details
-here and there, but to be honest, we don't have a comprehensive
-list of it all, apart from the git logs.
+here and there, See :ref:`whatsnew_upgrading_5.0` for more of this.
 
 
 Reasons not to upgrade to Varnish 5.0
@@ -57,6 +56,8 @@ Reasons not to upgrade to Varnish 5.0
 
 None that we know of af this time.
 
+Only in very special cases should you need to modify your VCL.
+
 
 Next release
 ------------
@@ -82,7 +83,7 @@ support and donations of money and manpower from four companies:
 Without them, this release, and for that matter all the previous
 ones, would not have happened.
 
-Even though they are by and large employees of the very
+Even though they are all employees of those very
 same companies, these developers merit personal praise:
 
 * Martin - HTTP/2 HPACK header compression code, stevedore API, VSL
@@ -149,6 +150,8 @@ Here is the `Varnish Cache github page <https://github.com/varnishcache/varnish-
 
 And here is the `Varnish Projects homepage on github <https://github.com/varnishcache/varnish-cache>`_.
 
+Welcome on board!
+
 *phk*
 
 



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